For my final project, I am writing a collection of poems based on the books that we have read this semester. For each book, I will choose a different poem type that reflects my initial thoughts and feelings, and how I perceive the narrative and morals/themes of the stories.
The first poem is completed, yet the others are a work in progress. I’ve planned out what kinds of poems I’m going to do, and with each poem, I’ll write a conclusion on my perceptions of the pieces, why I chose the poem styles that I did, and what some of the parts of the poem mean, indicate, or hint at.
For the first poem, I’d like help with word choice. I’m not sure if some parts convey what I’m trying to tell, or if the poem(s) are too wordy? I’d like help in mapping out some stuff that I’ve specified with italics or asterisks.
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